hungry is the low grumble,
the churning inside,
the muffled roar of desire
hungry is the echo of a toddler,
ringing through the halls
screaming,
bursting lungs
hungry is something loud
something consuming,
driven by the desire to consume
[definitely going to fix this, just found it in my drafts -- metaphor poem.
eeeegh]
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This has some good potential. I really like the echo of the toddler part. Really nice connection there....Keep working with this.
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